RP v2: minor tweak of current version

Existing Version

We the undersigned, ask Members of the European Parliament to reject the current draft of the INSPIRE Directive on European Spatial Data Infrastructure because:

The INSPIRE Directive risks holding back the economic and social potential in maps and location-based technology in Europe by many years.

New Version

We the undersigned, ask Members of the European Parliament to reject the current draft of the INSPIRE Directive on European Spatial Data Infrastructure because INSPIRE:

Given that:

INSPIRE risks holding back the economic and social potential in maps and location-based technology in Europe by many years.

[ED: do we need to define open access? e.g. something like that is the freedom to download and re-use without restriction]

Even Newer Version

Just change first sentence to:

We the undersigned, ask Members of the European Parliament to adequately amend or, failing that, to reject the current draft of the INSPIRE Directive on European Spatial Data Infrastructure because it: